I liked that you wrote your sentences more longer instead of short. You should improve to check your work before your done because some of your sentences don't make sense.
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ReplyDeleteI liked that you wrote your sentences more longer instead of short.
ReplyDeleteYou should improve to check your work before your done because some of your sentences don't make sense.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked how you had different tipes of poverty and i think thhat you can work on is having a solution not just ways to deal with it if you are poor
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